If I could fly

Before I continue, I would like to just say that I got this idea from my brother’s English assignment! 🙂

It would be a thrill to be able to fly! I would travel all over Europe and see all of the places I want to see! It would be a thrill to fly over and under the clouds, to be with the birds and see beautiful landscapes! Flying would be like a dream! One other note: The destinations I am about to mention are places I have always wanted to go to! If I could fly, I would definitely go to these places!

My first destination would be, the Kentucky Derby. I would go and see the horse races a million times over and over again! It would be awesome! After the Derby, I would go to the Smithsonian Museum and look at EVERYTHING there. After this, I would go see the historical places throughout New England!

Next, I would start flying to Austria. When I get to Austria, I would head straight towards the Spanish Riding School and see the Lipizzans preform. After taking MILLIONS of pictures, I would head straight towards Piber and see the Lipizzaner foals!

My next stop would be Germany to see the Grand Pri for my little brother. I would stop in Paris, France to get a bite to eat along the way.!

After making these stops, I would go and soar above the beautiful fields in Briton and Scotland and soak in the beautiful scenery then, I would go back home.

The end! Hope you liked it!

Lesson 70 essay

A long time ago, the church practically had power over everything but, they didn’t speak the real truth. Thankfully, there was men who really believed and spoke the real truth. Probably one of the greatest of these is, Martin Luther. But, there was a man two hundred years before him that did about the same things as he did. His name was John Wycliffe.

John Wycliffe was born in the 1320s in a well off – family. He was well educated and got a bachelor’s degree in theology at Oxford University.

Wycliffe had never agreed with what the church was doing and promoted against, indulgences, how the pope had power over everything, how the church was not simple like it was supposed to be, etc. Of course, this would highly offended the church but, he didn’t care.

John Wycliffe also saw that the priests were the only ones who got to read the bible. This was a huge problem for many reasons. First, the bible never said that the priests were the only ones allowed to read it. Second, the church could make things up because no one knew it wasn’t in the word. There were many other things but these were the main problems. So, John Wycliffe translated the Latin bible into English so all could read it and understand it.

This was a very good thing but sadly, he died before it was finished. On the brighter side, his friend finished and published it! This made the church even more furious so, many years later, John Wycliffe and his followers, the Lollards, were convicted of craziness so to speak. They then unburied Wycliffe’s body and burned his bones. His ashes were then scattered in a river.

The church thought that they could get rid of the real truth but, this didn’t stop men like Martin Luther to keep fighting for the truth. Now days, we can read the bible and know the Father’s word because of the men who fought for the truth.

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Lesson 50 essay

I LOVE baking! Besides working with and studying horses, it is one of my favorite things to do! I have probably been baking since I was eight, I am twelve now so, I have been baking for four years. One time, probably six months ago, I tried making a chocolate cake but, the middle had a super hard time cooking. No matter how long I cooked it for, the middle stayed gooey. It was so bad, that the top of the cake was burnt and the middle was still batter! So, I scooped the middle batter out, and tried making a “donut!” Of course, the cake wouldn’t come out of the round pan so, it was a “donut” in a pan. Well, I then made some frosting for it but, I put WAY too much food coloring in it so, it made the frosting super thin. I put the thin frosting on the cake but, it started to pour into the center of the cake! Then, I had an idea! I put my big batch of thin frosting into the middle until it filled to the top then, I spread the rest of the frosting on to the top of the cake. After doing this, I made some paper aliens, spaceships and signs then, taped them to skewers. Then, I placed my decorations on to the top of the cake. I also placed a sign near the hole filled with frosting that said, “Beware, the black hole!” I then poured glitter-like-sprinkles on top and called it my “space” cake. IT WAS TERRIBLE! That cake was soo sweet that I couldn’t eat it! It was so gross that we threw the rest of it out! It may have looked fun but, it didn’t pass the taste test! So, after a while, I decided that I was going to try to make another cake. I followed the directions, cooked the cake as long as it needed to and, it was perfect! It was perfectly cooked on the outside and the inside, it wasn’t to sweet and it come out of the pan in a perfect shape! I also had made the frosting perfect without putting food coloring in it this time! It was cute and, this time, pasted the taste test! After my try at cake baking, I have found that practice makes perfect and, if at first you don’t succeed, try, try again! Oh, and easy on the sugar!

Lesson 45 essay

Medieval Castles
After the famous medieval battle of Hastings, William the Conquer took over all of England. After being crowned, he introduced castle building.
Originally, castle building was a Norman thing and in England, the royal family and nobles had large fortified homes, not castles. It wasn’t until the Norman conquest of England castles become an English thing.
William built the very famous Tower of London shortly after his crowning. At first, the Tower of London was a symbol of Norman oppression but now, it is a very famous English landmark. Why did he build it? Well, the people of England did not like the idea of foreign rulers over them so, they had many riots against their new Norman king so, William needed a way to protect himself from the angry English people. So, he built the Tower of London. The Tower of London was a house for the royal family, a prison, an armory and a treasury. It was besieged several times but, has heeled its ground.
Over time, the English people were so out of order that William the Conquer built many smaller castles throughout England to protect the nobles who governed different parts of the land. That is why there is several small castles through out England that are either in ruins or are not livable.

Part two: Parts of a castles
The first castles were made of wood and earth materials. But over time, stone was added for strength. The Normans built in the Motte-and-Baily style.
The Keep- The strongest part of the castle that was usually on top of a Motte.
The Motte- Was a man made mound of earth that usually had a keep on the top of it.
The Bailey- The strong surrounding walls
The Curtain Wall- Surrounding walls that surrounded the Bailey
Gate Houses- They were attached to the Curtain Wall and were a way to get into the castles.
The Mott- A very steep ditch that surrounded the castles walls and was sometimes filled with water. You wouldn’t be able to get into the castles unless the drawbridge was down.

The development of the castle was continued all across Europe over several centuries. Castles were very important in England and, progressively became more of sybols of status than a defense.

Lesson 40 essay

Alfred the Great was a great Saxon King and a Christian Hero. He is also the only English monarch to be called “The Great.” When he was four years old, he was anointed king by the pope of Rome even though he had three older brothers. But, over time his brothers died and he was crowned king in 871. His reign got off to a shaky start because, the Danes invaded Wessex. Luckily, Alfred eventually held the Danes off. Meanwhile, the Danish king, Gurthrum, converted to Christianity in a peace treaty. Some of this was Alfred’s responsibility but it was very profitable because, this strengthened the ties between their two territories. Because of this, it made the country of England. In 886, Alfred marched on to London and reclaimed it. This act unified Southern Europe. Alfred the great is famous for several things, reorganizing the military, establishing a fleet of Longships, writing a 120 chapter long law code and, reviving education -which is his greatest achievement. He believed that every man – poor or rich- should receive an education. He found it important that for his country to succeed, it would have to rely on a good Christian education and faith. Alfred dealt with a lot of illness throughout his life which lead to his death in 899. He was succeeded by his son, Edward. It wasn’t till history writers in the 16th century added “the Great” to his name.

Lesson 35 essay

Best known as bloodthirsty barbarians, the Vikings weren’t like we think they were.
The Vikings were a Germanic tribe from Scandinavia that actually weren’t barbarians as we think. The term “barbarian” came from the Romans. The Romans thought of anyone who wasn’t Roman, a barbarian. And since that they had a lot of problems with the Viking people, they were best known as barbarians. in old Norse, Viking actually means, “Seamen” and “Expeditions” not, “Crazy persons.”
The most thought of item when someone says “Viking” is, their boats. The Vikings made two types of boats, the Longships and Knarrs. The Longships were for transporting warriors. Even though they are known as warships, they weren’t actually used for sea warfare. They were also used for expeditions and, trade. They were shaped the same front and back, expertly designed and, were propelled by wind power and/or oars. The Knarr ships were merchant ships that were much deeper, wider and shorter. They were primarily powered by wind but, had a few oars just in case.
The Vikings created their own alphabet that is mostly found on runestones. Runestones are a number of things such as, gravestones. They also told what the purpose of what the stone was, who erected it and the relation to the raiser and, the deceased.
The Vikings were a pagan culture who’s gods influenced us today. For example, Wednesday was named after Odin, Thursday after Thor and, Friday after Freya. Also, Thor is a Marvel superhero.
Every member of a Viking tribe was required to have a weapon which, typically revealed their social status… The Vikings typically used Axes which was unusual at the time because, axes were like the old fashioned weapon at the time. They used swords as well but, not as much as axes. They did use bows and arrows but, that was less honorable. The Vikings fought in a very unorganized, chaotic fashion.
The Vikings were usually blue eyed and had either red or blond hair.
They were primarily farmers but, could have also been, metalworkers or jewelers. They depended mostly on livestock and, in the summer, they had vegetables and grains.
All though they did plunder and raid, they were actually very clean and tidy people at home and, took pride in this. Also, Vikings didn’t have helmets with horns on them. That would have been to impractical.
The Vikings greatest legacy is the many colonies and settlements that they started throughout Scandinavia, Russia and, even North America.

Lesson 25 essay

In 622, the city of Medina became the first Islamic community led by Muhammad, the first Islamic leader.
Muhammad was born in 570, near the Ka’ba shrine –that is believed to be an alter the Abraham made- in the city of Mecca. A while after his birth, his father died then, his mother died when he was six years old. After the death of his mother, he was orphaned by his uncle then, at the age of twenty-four, he married a rich widow and, became a successful merchant. It wasn’t till he was the age of forty when he had his first vision. He claimed that his vision told him he was the prophet for a new religion and, that he needed to prophecy to the world. But his hometown didn’t accept this new, strange religion –they were pantheists- in fact, his own household kicked him out and, was some tried to assassinate him. So, he fled to the city of Medina and started to prophecy there. At that time, Madina was at a poor state so, when they heard about this new religion, the quickly accepted it. Later, Muhammad became leader of Medina. War broke out between Medina and Mecca for religious reasons shortly after Muhammad had control of Medina. Medina, captured Mecca and banned pantheism and made official religion, Islam.
In 632, Muhammad led a journey, known as the first Islam pilgrimage, with many other Muslims, from Medina, to the Ka’ba shrine in Mecca. Now, this shrine is the holiest Islamic place and, is inside a mosque in Mecca for protection. Today, every Muslim goes on pilgrimage Muhammad took at least once in his or her life. At the end of the pilgrimage, Muhammad gave his famous farewell sermon –at the time he didn’t know it would be his last. A few months later, in 632, he became very sick and died.
After Muhammad’s death, Islam began to spread very quickly and, today it is the second largest nation and, religion in the world today.

Lesson 20 essay

King Arthur and Early English Tribes
Great Britain now is not what is was then. In fact, the Romans called the early English tribes, Barbarians. Great Britain was originally inhabited by a tribe known as, the Britons. But, at the decline of the Roman empire, the Angles tribe invaded and gained power leading to a strong hold on Europe in the 5th century. At this time, another tribe from the coast of Germany known as the Saxons, invaded the islands such as modern-day Great Britain. The Britons had many invasions from the Angles and the Saxons that turned to 12 major battles but, eventually they made peace with one another. Also, the Saxons and the Angles started intermarrying with each other and became the Anglo-Saxons. The accounts of the 12 major battles fought by the 3 English tribes are found in THE HISTORY OF THE EARLY KINGS OF BRITAIN by Geoffrey of Monmouth.
It is believed that Geoffrey was the creator of the legendary King Arthur because, he frequently points to this heroic king several times. Geoffrey said that King Arthur killed 960 mean at the battle of Badon Hill. Even though we don’t know if King Arthur is actually real or not, he still to this day, is a heroic figure.
The Britons and the Anglo-Saxons lived in peace until invasion of the Normans in 1066 AD. The word “England”-the great kingdom we know today- comes from the early Angles.

Lesson 50 essay

A Knight of the White Cross by G.A. Henty is a fun book that is full of action and adventure.
G.A. Henty is a wonderful author but, in this book, I have found some down sides to his style. Henty explains things (such as an object or person) in his books in depth but, not in to great of depth. I do not like an author who doesn’t explain anything. This problem will make a book short and will lack substance. I also do not like an author who has to explain every last thing in detail. This type of author will go on and on about little things like a tree! He will have five, long paragraphs on a tree that will only be mentioned once in the book! This will loose the reader’s attention and make the book long and boring. Henty does good at not making his books this way. I have read three of his books now and one thing I do not like is that he makes time in his book go by very quickly. For example, in a Knight of the White Cross, Gervaise becomes a young knight in about five chapters, even though he was a young page in the beginning of the book. I have found that this is a constant problem. In the Dragon and the Raven and Wulf the Saxon, time goes by very quickly as well. I do not like this because it is like jumping all around in the book and, that can get confusing.
Henty’s plot line is really good but, it seems to go all over the place. For example, they are sort of at peace then suddenly they are war. Besides this problem, the plot line is great and, has a lot of historical information.
A Knight of the White Cross is a great book and G. A. Henty is a great author, I look forward to reading more of this author’s works.

Lesson 45 essay

Character development
In a Knight of the White Cross, G. A Henty doesn’t introduce Gervaise, the main character, right away. But when he does introduce Gervaise, time seems to go by very quickly. For example, in just a few chapters, Gervaise becomes a young knight even though in the beginning of the book, he was a page just starting out. To me, about five chapters seems like not enough time to become a knight. Also, Gervaise is constantly becoming some type of captain or commander. Don’t you think that he should be an older knight and, be more skilled to have these positions?
Besides those problems, Henty’s character development is great! I like how he doesn’t just introduce the main characters right away. I like that I get to know the characters by their actions through time. Another thing I like about Henty’s character development is how the main character always has a good friend constantly beside him. For example, the relationship between Gervaise and Ralph, they are both good friends, they always encourage each other and, are always together no matter what happens.

Author’s style
I like Henty’s style because he explains different things in his books in depth but, not too in depth. That is the kind of author I like. I don’t like an author who doesn’t explain his characters or what is happening. Sure, he might say, “There was pirates” but, that doesn’t explain enough. I also don’t like an Author who explains things in too great of depth. For example, that author explains just one thing in depth and it takes forever to get to the main plot because he will not stop talking about one thing. Then, that starts to make the book boring and, loses the readers attention. I personally like an equal balance that explains something but, not in too great of depth. Another thing I like about Henty’s style is, it is very smooth and easy to read. I personally think that his style is one of the best styles I have read.
Over all, a Knight of the White Cross is a good book and, I look forward to reading the rest of it.